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Oh, hello,<br />
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My name is Thomas Holler, I am a writer from Toronto. I use this blog to practice all kinds of writing. <br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2015/04/an-open-letter-to-anyone-who-can-help.html"><span style="color: blue;"><b>Here's a list of what I've worked on.</b></span></a><br />
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<span style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Thank you.</span></span><br />
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<span style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"> </span><b> </b></span>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-85861855837935174222015-12-09T18:00:00.001-08:002015-12-09T18:00:53.183-08:00Now what?<br />
What now?<br /><br />I finished my movie script, now I need a new project because without one I feel aimless.<br />
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So what do I want to do?<br /><br />Well, not another movie script. Not right away anyway. It turns out that writing a movie is a MAMMOTH sized project. It was very, very hard and it took me the better part of a year to get it finished. I need to find something simpler to create with a quicker turnaround time. <br /><br />So what's that?<br /><br />I have no idea...<br />
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I am thinking.<br />
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-69728107112617193362015-09-19T13:23:00.003-07:002015-09-19T13:32:14.886-07:00TREATMENT - I AM NOT A WEIRDO - A thriller by Thomas Holler
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<b>I AM NOT A WEIRDO</b></div>
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<span style="font-size: x-small;">A thriller by
Thomas Holler</span></div>
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<i>That moment in a
relationship where the one you love starts to show signs of violent
dementia.</i></div>
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Synopsis:</div>
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Douglas and Abigail are a
young couple starting their life together, Douglas has agreed to move
into Abigail's beautiful, ancestral home in the country. Helping them
move on their happy day are Douglas' best friend Grant, Abby's favorite co-worker Bryce and her father Richard who's never liked
Douglas. Douglas is big and sarcastic and not afraid to speak his
mind, Abby is cute and quirky. All things considered, they're a great
match. For the first few weeks things couldn't be better but then one
morning Abigail finds a note on the counter, it's a collection of
violent ramblings, it scares her. Over the coming days she finds
other creepy things that make her question Douglas but in his typical
Douglas way he convinces Abby there are logical explanations for
everything. Both of them badly want this relationship to work, they
decide not to dwell on these little mysteries anymore. To ease her
tension Douglas takes his woman for a romantic dinner on the pier and
they fall in love all over again.</div>
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The next morning it all
comes to an end. Waking up alone, Douglas heads out to the hall to
find Abigail standing outside of her guestroom with a horrified
expression on her face. She's screaming at him, accusing him of doing
something disgusting. He has no idea what she's talking about. When
Douglas sees what's inside the guestroom his face goes white.
Demented writing covers the walls. Abigail's dolls which once
decorated the room have been mutilated and twisted into violent
sexual positions. It's dark. Abigail is scared of Douglas, Douglas
thinks Abigail lost her mind. They fight, Abigail throws him out.
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Douglas races to Grant's
house, with his help they plan on trying to convince her to see a
doctor. They never get the chance, as soon as they turn onto the
lonely road leading to her house their car is hit from behind and
spun out. When they awake they're met with Richard's shotgun and an
ultimatum. Leave or be killed. Douglas leaves, but not without a
fight. The next morning Douglas is arrested when he attempts to get
to Abby, he's told that during the night someone tried to kill her in
her sleep and he's the main suspect. Without evidence, he's
eventually released. Broken and at the end of his rope Douglas still
can't seem to let Abby go, in a effort to watch over her he takes to
stalking her. Meanwhile Abigail is trying to get over Douglas with
the help of her father and Bryce, they're the only ones who make her
feel safe with her psycho ex-boyfriend on the loose.</div>
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One night while he's
watching her house Douglas sees a mysterious figure sneaking in
through Abigail's side window. Douglas follows the figure inside the
house and chases it away but is caught by Abby and arrested on the
spot. Douglas, now sure that Abby isn't crazy; turns his suspicions
towards Bryce, who's been getting cozy with Abigail. Douglas soon
confronts Bryce, accusing him of destroying everything he had and
taking Abby from him. Bryce responds by pulling a gun on Douglas and
telling him to stay away from Abigail. Later that night Douglas finds
Bryce bleeding to death from a stab wound on Abigail's porch. Douglas
races Bryce to the hospital and saves his life, there Bryce tells him
that there's someone inside the house.
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In the final act Douglas
races back to Abigail's house to warn her about the stranger in the
basement but as soon as Abby sees Douglas she slams the door and
locks herself inside with the attacker. Meanwhile Douglas tries
frantically to break down the door until he's spotted by Richard and
his shotgun who thinks he's there to kill Abigail. Douglas has to
battle his way through Richard to save Abigail who's also fighting
for her life inside the house against a rabid, basement dwelling
psychopath.
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If you'd like to read my script then email me at <a href="mailto:apescripts@gmail.com"><span style="color: blue;">apescripts@gmail.com</span></a></div>
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<p dir="ltr">The short explanation for why I haven't posted in so long is that after I converted everything I'd written so far in to a script program, I found that I couldn't copy and paste my work here without all these formatting errors and that was annoying so I decided not to bother. </p>
<p dir="ltr">I kept writing though. I will say this, writing a movie is very hard. If you're someone out there who has decided to write their first script then expect to struggle. Expect to feel like a bum. Writing isn't typing, writing is sitting on your couch staring at a wall and listening to music until an idea hits you. It feels unproductive and all your instincts will tell you to quit and stop wasting your time. </p>
<p dir="ltr">It's not fun, its work. If you're still driven to see your idea through then just keep at it. Remember that even if you're just writing a paragraph everyday then you're slowing getting it finished. Just keep coming back to it, make it a habit, hold yourself accountable. Grind it out and you WILL finish, and when you do it feels pretty cool. </p>
<p dir="ltr">So my script is finished. </p>
<p dir="ltr">Now what?<br><br></p>
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<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><u><b><span style="color: blue;">Here's the full script that I am working on</span></b></u></a>.<br />
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And now tonight's boring scene... <br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail is sitting outside on her patio furniture, nervously awaiting Bryce's return. Beside her is her father Richard, neither is speaking. Both are sitting silently, waiting, contemplating. The sound of a car coming up the lonely road leading to her house catches both of their attention. Abigail see's Bryce's truck come into sight, she gets up and walks to the driveway to meet him. Concern is registered on her face. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce pulls into the driveway, he takes a second to collect himself for Abby's sake and exits the vehicle. <br /> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL<br />Hey. How did it go? Was he home?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />No. Thank god.<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL<br />Oh...<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />I left him his things. It's done.<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL<br />Ok. That's that, I guess.<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />That's that Abby. I promise.<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL<br />Well, lets celebrate! I been in baking mode all morning just to take my mind of things. How does wine and cake sound? Or pie. Or cupcakes. I went a little overboard.<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />Wine sounds about right.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL<br />I'll set the table.<br />Thanks again Bryce, you've been amazing.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce smiles back at her, the two hug and Abby heads back inside her house. Richard is sitting on the porch watching. Bryce walks over to him.<br /> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD<br />He wasn't home?<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />No. Lucky.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD<br />I guess you didn't need that gun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce doesn't really answer, he just nods off the question and moves to follow Abby into the house before Richard's next question stops him in his tracks.<br /> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD<br />Can I have it back? The gun?<br /> </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />I was thinking maybe I should hang onto it.<br /> </span></div>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">This time Richard doesn't respond. He looks at Bryce quizzically.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE<br />Just incase.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard nods, giving his approval. Bryce heads into the house. Richard is left on the porch, he sips on his coffee and looks out at the area around the house with watchful the eye of a watchdog. </span>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-18184770722190774562015-04-30T20:51:00.002-07:002015-09-17T22:19:55.929-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: The big confrontation.I am still at it, writing my first movie script which I collect <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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Here's today's entry. We're pushing towards the big finale, from here things will be moving at a really quick pace. I have a hell of an ending coming.<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce pulls into a the driveway of a small, one level house in a dingy part of town. Bryce sits for a second collecting his thoughts, he pulls the gun out of his waistband and looks hard at it. Bryce has a moment of clarity and decides to put the gun away into his glove compartment. Bryce steps out of car door, heads to the back door of his u-haul and opens it. He starts pulling Douglas' things out of the truck and putting them on the font lawn, hoping to just leave Douglas his things and without confrontation. That's wishful thinking, Douglas comes bursting out of the front door.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">HEY! </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce doesn't answer him, he keeps pulling Douglas' things out of the truck.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You want to tell me what that the fuck you're doing?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas, I am just giving you your things back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why are YOU giving me my things back?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Would you rather have Abby's dad do this?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Where's Abby?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas...I don't want to get into this.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Stay away from her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are you kidding me?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's funny how this worked out isn't it? I am out of the picture and no less than a month later you move right in.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce doesn't answer him, he stares a hole through Douglas.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I know it was you Bryce.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I know it was you. The note. The dolls. I know it was you. How did you do it? Did you have a key all along? Did Abby give you a house key?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas' teeth grit, his hands ball into a fist. Bryce takes notice, he glances towards the truck, gauging how much distance is between him and the glove compartment. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">When I caught you in that house...what were you doing there? Why did you come back? </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas is getting more and more animated.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby turned you away, I was there. I saw you leave! I saw her send you away.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You were watching us?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What were you doing sneaking back into her house? What were you going to do to her?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce sees how angry Douglas is getting, he starts to back his way towards the truck. Douglas follows him.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I wasn't IN her house. I went home that night. YOU were the one who snuck into her house.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah I did, after I saw someone climb through her window.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Oh yeah? You saw that while you were stalking us?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">YES!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You really are sick.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am getting real tired of hearing that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce backs right up to his truck and reaches for the door.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You're running away?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce dashes into his car, Douglas follows him. Douglas grabs a hold of Bryce and forcibly pulls him out of the car.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We're not done talking!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce responds with gun pointed right at Douglas, Douglas takes a step back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You're crazy and you're dangerous and you're going to leave Abby alone. I swear to god I'll kill you. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Shoot.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Take your shit, never come back. If you do I'll be there waiting to put a bullet in you. I won't let you hurt her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hurt her? All I've ever done is protect her. I've taken it on the CHIN for that girl. I've been arrested, shot at, beat up and arrested again all because some psycho wouldn't leave us alone. You know what the worst part is? I didn't believe her. I thought she was making it all up. She wasn't was she?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No. She wasn't.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You're going to have to kill me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce is genuinely temped to do it, instead he backs up to his truck. Never lowering his gun. He makes it to his truck and gets in.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You ruined my life. This won't ever be over.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce doesn't respond, he pulls out of the driveway and speeds off. Douglas' things spill out of his truck as he leaves.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-47982763534930622302015-04-21T21:14:00.001-07:002015-04-21T21:35:39.691-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Gun face. Ok, tomorrow's project is to write a solid two or three sentence synopsis for this thriller I am writing so I can actually sell you on clicking <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE</b></u></span></a> and getting all caught up to today's post (below).<br />
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Or don't. To be honest I don't expect you to. As long as I keep posting I'll eventually have finished my first movie script though. It's pretty dope too.<br />
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<i>Not at all sorry that I googled 'gun face'</i>.</div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S KITCHEN.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard is sitting at Abigail's table, he's staring contemplatively into his coffee mug. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I wish I'd killed him.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Don't say that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail is sitting with her father, Bryce is leaning against a wall with coffee in hand.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I wish it wasn't so damn dark that night, I couldn't see him. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank god. You'd still be in jail if you hit him. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I would have gone to jail for the rest of my life just to know that piece of shit wasn't going to be out there anymore.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Don't say that! He's not worth it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That judge made me sick. Letting him lie like that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I should go find him. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No! He just got out of jail and there's a restraining order against him now. He can't come here.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You think that sick bastard cares about a restraining order?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard looks up at Bryce.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am coming with you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You can't!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">To hell with that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am with Abby, you two can't be anywhere near each other.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Dad, just stay away. You're not going back to jail because of him!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I have his things all packed, I won't be there long.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What if he won't come to the door?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Then I'll leave his stuff on his front lawn.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You're taking a gun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No. Thank you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">If you don't want me coming with you then you're taking a gun. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am not planning on needing one Richard.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No one does. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce nods the comment off and puts his cup in the sink. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I think I am going to head out.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Now? It's 9 am.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Yeah, and hopefully he'll still be sleeping. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">EXT - DRIVEWAY - BRYCES U-HAUL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail hands Bryce the last of Douglas' things. The finality of it brings a tear to her eye, Bryce notices but says nothing. Before Bryce can get into the truck Richard corners him and shoves a gun into Bryce's hands. Bryce takes the gun and tucks it in his waistband. He gives Richard a knowing nod.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby, this will be behind us soon.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She puts on a smile, Bryce shuts the door and drives off with the last of Douglas packed in his truck.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-19016094012205143402015-04-20T20:20:00.000-07:002015-04-20T20:21:01.089-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: The build to the end.You know what? We're well past the halfway point of my thriller and it's time to start putting the pieces in place for my big ending. I mean that too, my ending is big. From this point onward the story is going to pick up a frenetic pace as my characters stumble their way towards a conclusion that wraps this whole mystery up in a tight, action packed little bow. <br />
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Once again, I collect everything as I go and post it all <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE</b></u></span></a><br />
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I still haven't written out a synopsis I am in love with but imagine if you were to wake up one morning and your terrified girlfriend was accusing you of doing something completely f**king psycho. That happened to Douglas.<br />
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<i>I admit this is who I was picturing as I wrote this scene.</i></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas is being led through a hallway by a couple of officers to a small room with a table. Sitting at the table is his public defender. Douglas takes a seat across from him and the two are left alone. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">LAWYER</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hello Douglas, my name is Alister Cross. I'll be defending you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas doesn't answer.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I've been looking over your case, I think we'll be able to get you out of here. A man's ex-fiance accuses him of torturing...dolls and then locks him out of the house they shared. According to the police report she made claims of violence but you were never charged?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I didn't do it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Good. The police apparently didn't think so either because I don't see any charges laid. That's very good. Now we just have to convince the judge that you were only in her house to get your things back so you could move on and finally forget about the crazy bitch.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas shoots him a look.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hey, looks like that aren't going to help you get out of there. We need to convince this judge that you want nothing to do with this girl, when he tells you he's placing a restraining order between the two of you; you thank him.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">There was someone else in that house. I want them to find him, keep Abby safe. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She's safe and you staying behind bars isn't keeping her any safer. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Is it?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well then. You made up that intruder story that because you were scared, you got caught and were worried about getting in trouble so you made something up. The mysterious stranger excuse, oldest one in the book. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">And then I chased after someone I just made up?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No, you ran because you knew she was going to call her dad and his shotgun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">They won't believe me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are you kidding me? No one believes you now. If you go in there and tell that judge that you only broke into your ex's house to chase out some dark, faceless figure then all you'll do is convince him you need to be kept out of the public and put into a looney bin. I ask you, is that what you want?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">...I was just there to get my stuff...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Exactly. I think we can get time served plus probation, plus obviously you'd have to agree to never be within a hundred feet of her ever again. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Just her?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">And her father probably, but we'll consider that a blessing. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Get me out of here.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I'd like you to make a statement. You were alone in that house with Abigail, you saw no one else. Judges are like mothers, they give points for honesty.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Honesty?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">LAWYER</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">...Is Abigail safer with you behind bars?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well then.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The lawyer slides a pen and paper across the table to Douglas, urging him to write his statement.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You were alone. You just wanted to get your things back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(reluctantly)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I was alone.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-23927912506490792882015-04-16T22:03:00.000-07:002015-04-16T22:03:28.493-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Remind people that this is a thriller.Back with another page to add to <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>THIS</b></u></span></a> <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="background-color: blue;"></span></a>thriller I am writing. Lets go.<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce and Abigail are on the couch, the light of the television is the only thing illuminating the room. Abigail is curled up in the corner of the couch hugging a cushion. It's a bright night outside, the light coming in from the windows casts long shadows throughout the room. Bryce and Abby sit stoically, both staring at the tv. Half focuse<u><b>d</b></u> on what they're watching and half lost in thought. Their shadows stretch along the length of the room and up to the ceiling. Unmoving. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Their shadows are joined by a third shadow. It moves into frame and stops, it's placed near the window. Somewhere in the blackness something is there, staring at the couple watching TV in the dark. Neither Bryce nor Abby notice. The shadow lingers for a few moments then disappears as it blends back into the blackness of the room.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail yawns.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yawwwwwwwww...my god.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You should go to bed. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Good idea. Where are you going to sleep?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Right here.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> I have an extra bedroom.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am good here.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(smiles)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It helps, you being here.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">This was fun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(yawns again) </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> I know, I waaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Excuse me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Go to bed. Get some sleep. You need it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank you. Goodnight.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Goodnight Abby.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail hugs Bryce and then goes to a linen closet and hands him a pillow and a blanket, she heads upstairs. Bryce pulls the cover over himself and closes his eyes.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce is asleep on the couch. In the dark room behind him someone is watching him. Someone is standing behind the couch looking down on him, cloaked in darkness. </span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-87937379216096721652015-04-15T20:48:00.002-07:002015-04-15T20:48:39.994-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: All dialogue...blah blah blah.<blockquote class="tr_bq">
Douglas and Abigail are in love. Then one morning Douglas finds Abigail standing in the hallway, trembling and terrified. She's standing beside a room. She thinks he did something. Something only a psycho would do.</blockquote>
That's the idea behind the script I am writing, it's my first. I post as I go. Down there is today's entry, all the rest can be found right <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><b>HERE</b></span></a>.<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The officer sees himself out, leaving Abigail and Bryce alone. Abigail is staring into dead space, in thought. Bryce lets her have her silence.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I want a gun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I need a gun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby. He's in jail.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He won't always be.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He has a restraining order against him now. He can't come anywhere near you. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> He's crazy! He doesn't care. Bryce I am not moving, so he's always going to know where I live.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Maybe we should just move you back to your fathers. Just for a bit.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Fucking asshole.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Sorry?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas. Not pressing charges against my dad, I know what he's doing. He's manipulating me. He's trying to get me to trust him. Piece of shit.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That night, when Douglas was in your house. What do you think he wanted?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Honestly? I think he wanted to kill me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't get why he told you to call the police.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Because I scared him. I saw him before he could get me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Did he look scared?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah. I caught his ass and he knew it. So he made up some bullshit story and ran.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">If he came here to hurt you then why not hurt you? When you started screaming, why run? Why not attack?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What the hell are you saying? </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am just thinking.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What? Someone else was here and poor Douglas was just trying to save me from the dark figure?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.
No! This isn't a movie. Real life doesn't have twists like that. Your ex-fiance
actually IS just one of those sick stalkers you read about, that's why
this is happening. That's the only reason this is happening.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I need a gun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We'll talk to your father when he gets out. If you still want one, he has lots. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail give him a half smile.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am sorry Abby.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Wht? It's not your fault.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Con't... </span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-80509241366671042342015-04-12T21:48:00.000-07:002015-04-15T20:44:11.955-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: The aftermath of all that stuff that happened.Still writing my first movie script. It's a thriller. <br />
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You can check it out <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;"><b>HERE</b></span></a>.<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - LIVING ROOM</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce
is in Abby's home. He's walking from the kitchen to the living room
carrying a steaming cup of tea. Inside the living room Abigail is
sitting with the police. The lead officer is that same one who
interrogated Conrad earlier. Bryce hands Abigail the tea.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We have him on criminal trespassing, but these waters are bit murky given your former living situation.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No they're not, I told him I didn't ever want to see him again.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You still have his things.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why do you still have his things?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't want them.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You see why a jury might be sympathetic to someone breaking into a house to get his own things back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">HE ATTACKED ME!!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We
weren't able to prove that. We weren't able to lay a single charge in
that case, in a court of law that means it didn't happen.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">And what about this other thing that he's saying? That he saw someone?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You
mean this mysterious figure that he conveniently can't give a
description of because it was too dark? I wouldn't lose sleep over that.
Frankly it's not the first time we heard that one from someone. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">So where is he?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Right
now he's behind bars until he sees a judge but unless we have something
that can keep him there then he's probably going to get away with a
fine and some probation. Are you sure you didn't notice anything last
night as you were leaving?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I didn't see anything.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Miss...maybe it would be better if you stayed with someone for a while. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am staying with her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">When are you letting my father go?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Actually Douglas refuses to press charges against your father. He'll be out later today.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The room falls quiet.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well, we'll be leaving. This time we'd like you to file an official restraining order against Douglas, and if I were you I'd think about finding someplace else to live. He's...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Keep an eye on her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I will.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We'll be in touch.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Cont'd...</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-8205800494026855552015-04-08T20:59:00.001-07:002015-04-08T20:59:34.150-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE AND HE'S PAST THE HALFWAY POINT.<br />
As of this entry I am officially more than halfway finished my first script.<br />
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Douglas and Abby have just started a happy life. Abby loves Douglas,
Douglas adores Abby. One day there's a break. A psychotic break. Abby
finds a room full of her favorite dolls, all torn apart and molested.
Disturbed writing scrawled all over the walls. Douglas won't admit to
it, he says Abby is very sick. Abby says Douglas is very sick. She wants
him gone, he wants her back.</blockquote>
You can catch up on the whole story by clicking <span style="color: blue;"><a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><u><b>HERE.</b></u></a> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas chases the figure out the front door, in the background he can still hear Abigail screaming. Outside of Abigail's house is almost pitch black, once you're away from the houselights there's little illumination. Surrounding her house is a thick wooded area, Douglas sees the figure race into the forest. He follows it into the darkness, he looses is as it whips through the trees and becomes invisible in the night. Douglas stops his pursuit. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas collects himself and then heads back towards Abby's house, he hesitates for a second. Tempted to make a break for it, he realizes the only way to clear his name is to face the police and explain his side of the story. He's compelled to tell them about Abby's stalker. Douglas starts towards the house. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Gunshot. The tree beside Douglas's head explodes. Douglas hits the ground on instinct, when he gets up he sees Richard taking aim at him with his shotgun. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard! Put that gun down. I am coming out. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard fires again, this time leaving no doubt that he's aiming to hit Douglas. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard!!!!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I told you I'd kill you if I ever saw you again.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He levels his gun at Douglas, its staring him dead in the eye. Douglas doesn't call Richard's bluff, he runs into the trees. Another blast from behind him sends him to the dirt. Douglas can hear sirens. The lights of the police cars threaten to give away Douglas's position. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Put down your weapon!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richards gun is still locked on Douglas's hiding place, he doesn't lower it when ordered. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">POLICE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Put the gun down NOW! </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richards reluctantly legs go of his shotgun, never once taking his eyes off Douglas. Not until the police tackle him to the ground. Officers approach the edge of the forest, their flashlight piecing though the blackness. Douglas hides against the stump of a tree. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Is anyone there? Come out!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas is conflicted, his primal instinct is to run but he thinks about Abby. He need to tell someone that she's being stalked. Someone is doing all this to her, to them.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">POLICE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Last chance. Come out!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Ok...I am coming out. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The police train their guns on Douglas as he emerges from the dark forest, he's brought down and handcuffed. On the porch a tearful Abigail watches the police take him and her father away.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-21729733236976109972015-04-01T19:36:00.001-07:002017-04-17T19:27:04.416-07:00My SCRIPTS, ARTICLES, VIDEOS<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;">
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Writing is something I would love to get paid to do someday. Even if I don't, apparently I am going to keep doing it anyway because I've never been able to stop. <br />
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Here's what's come out of my head so far:<br />
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<b><i>SCRIPTS</i>:</b><br />
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I finished my first movie script. It's a thriller about couple, a man and a woman who's love falls apart because each one thinks the other is a complete psychopath.<br />
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It's called <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2015/09/treatment-i-am-not-weirdo-thriller-by.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>I am Not A Weirdo</b></u></span></a><br />
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I also wrote a short horror movie called <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2013/07/lurking-everything-right-up-until-post.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Lurking</b></u></span></a> about a girl named Darcy who sets sail with her new fiance Cade on an ocean adventure across the world only to wake up alone one morning with no sign of him and something in a water stalking her small boat.<br />
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Want something lighter? Here's a short script about 3 roommates trying to decide if something is a <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/dumb-little-script-where-guy-eats-spider.html" target="_blank"><u><span style="color: blue;"><b>spider or a hairy chocolate chip</b></span></u></a>. <br />
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How about something dark? Here's a short script I just call the <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2013/08/normal-0-false-false-false-en-ca-x-none.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Hotel Murder</b></u></span></a> script. <br />
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This is an oldie I wrote about two drunk guys talking about space on a walk home from the bar. I call it <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/10/a-post-for-space-nerds.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Two Drunk Guys Talk About Space On A Walk Home From The Bar</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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Being a comic nerd I felt it was my responsibility to invent a superhero. This guy's name is <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/04/finding-beautiful-girl-dying-in-her-own.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Cockroach</b></u></span></a> and he's the last person you want catching you in the act of murdering a young girl.<br />
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I've tinkered with the idea of writing a romantic comedy but I've only gotten so far as writing a couple practice scenes. <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/04/lets-try-writing-some-relationshipy.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE</b></u></span></a> and <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/05/toms-still-writing-romantic-comedy.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE</b></u></span></a><br />
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This one has gotten me in trouble because aparently it's controvertial to write a short comedy about a <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/feeling-uninspired.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>man who was date raped at a party and goes on a quest to find his female rapist</b></u></span></a>. If she's ugly he's going to press charges. If she's hot he's going to ask her out.<br />
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I wrote an internet show called House Arrested about a group of dipshits all under house arrest. I played with a couple variations on the idea. <br />
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House Arrested: <br />
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Ep 1 - <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/11/this-came-out-of-my-brain.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Benjamin gets stabbed.</b></u></span></a><br />
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Ep 2 - <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/11/i-had-to-run-outside-in-bitter-cold-of.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Benjamin gets stabbed again.</b></u></span></a><br />
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Ep 3 - <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2014/01/uturn-i-rewrote-house-arrested-dick-pic.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Dick Pics</b></u></span></a><br />
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Ep 4 - <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2014/01/which-one-of-us-do-you-think-would.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Cannibalism</b></u></span></a><br />
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Ep 5 - <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2015/03/house-arrested-series-of-shorts-that.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>The mouse fight.</b></u></span></a><br />
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I also wrote and developed a half hour workplace, action comedy about a group of low paid, government ghostbusters called DOPE (Department of Paranormal Events).<br />
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DOPE:<br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/short-story-about-ghostbusting-team.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Short #1 - Knife teeth</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/05/dope-ghost-busting-story.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Short #2 - Little Kid Ghost</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2012_10_01_archive.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Pitch Package and Episode 1 - Buried Alive.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2013/09/dope-episode-2.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Episode 2 - Vampires</b></u></span></a><br />
<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2015/03/dope-episode-3-teaser.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b><br /></b></u></span></a>
<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2015/03/dope-episode-3-teaser.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Episode 3 (Teaser) - Zombies</b></u></span></a><br />
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THREE ONE MINUTE SCRIPTS:<br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/12/one-minute-short-script-about-loser.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>A story about a loser who will never, ever get the girl</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/12/christmas-is-about-peace-love-and.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>A story about a meek coward forced to save a woman from an attacker at night</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/12/skinny-dipping-in-moonlight-1-minute.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>A story about a lucky guy who skinny dips with a beautiful woman and doesn't notice the monster behind him.</b></u></span></a><br />
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I've also got a couple example of ideas under development. One is a video game show I was working on with a friend called <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/pwned-video-game-gameshow.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Pwned</b></u></span></a> and the other is for a movie about a <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/07/10000-views-technically-10333-also.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>violent flash mob</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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<b><i><span style="color: red;">VIDEOS: </span></i></b><br />
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Here's an archive of videos I've made, many of them I've starred in.<br />
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This is the pilot we shot, it's essentially about two people who resolve to never work a day in their lives. It was called <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/the-beautiful.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>THE BEAUTIFUL</b></u></span></a> and it features a guest appearance by Shay Mitchell.<br />
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Here's a gory horror short I was in called <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/gory-horror-video.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>CLEAVER</b></u></span></a><br />
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Here's a trailer for another little short I was in, a heist movie called <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/06/the-worst-laid-plans-toronto-film.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>WORST LAID PLANS</b></u></span></a><br />
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Ok this...this takes some explaining and it's probably the thing I am proudest of. There was once a free animation site called Xtranormal. It allowed you to choose characters, a background and a few animations to write a scene around. You were limited to what was presented in the backgrounds, meaning if you chose to do the train settings then you would have to write a scene around the train and whatever else was there in the pre-set image. The feature allowed for text-to-speech writing which resulted in a couple of robotic voices so it's best to imagine this is taking place in a world where everyone sounds like Stephen Hawking. This was about writing within limitations and forced you to be creative. I miss that site. Here's what I came up with - <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/lord-give-me-actors.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HEROES OF JUSTICE</b></u></span></a><br />
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This is just a simple little clip of me reading my favorite supervillain monologue from Final Crisis #3 when I was sick and my voice was <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2014/04/nasty-cold-sexy-voice.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>super sexy</b></u></span></a>. <br />
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<b><i>ARTICLES</i></b><br />
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Here's an article I wrote on the incredible, first black boxing champion <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/01/he-talked-more-st-than-ali-and-shocked.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Jack Johnson</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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This was actually my attempt to bring my favorite comic character back from obscurity. I call it the <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/10/the-killrazor-experiment-experiment-to.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Killrazor Experiment</b></u></span></a> and it was unsuccessful. <br />
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I HATE that book/video/philosophy called "the Secret" and <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/07/tom-destroys-secret-laws-of-attraction.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>HERE'S WHY</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/canada-slow-and-steady-wins-race.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Canada - Slow and Steady</b></u></span></a><br />
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<b><i>PERSONAL STORIES:</i></b><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/10/the-time-i-caught-norwalk-virus-while.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>The time I caught the Norwalk virus while testing playstations at work.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/09/the-biggest-ass-kicking-ive-ever-taken.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>The worst ass kicking I've ever taken.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/01/i-am-64-and-i-cant-dunk-its-my-single.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>I am 6'4 and can't dunk, it's my single biggest failing in life.</b></u></span></a> <br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/03/the-time-bully-had-me-cornered-in.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>The time a bully had me cornered in the washroom.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/06/two-amazing-things-ive-experienced-in.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Two random and amazing experiences.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<b><i>ADVERTISING:</i></b><br />
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I once considered getting into a career in copywriting before it was explained to me that the actual profession has little to do with writing and more to do with graphic design. Anyway, I used this blog to try it out.<br />
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Men should be the ones buying <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/men-should-be-ones-buying-scented.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>SCENTED CANDLES</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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Stubble so sharp it can be used to peel potatoes? <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/09/wolverine-making-sandwich-manly-bubble.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Try these shaving products</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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<b><i>MONOLOGUES:</i></b><br />
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Monologue Mondays were a thing...until I totally forgot about them. It was what it sounds like, I would write and post a stand alone monologue. They were fun, I should do more of these.<br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/hey-racist-youre-bad-at-science.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>Hey racist. You're bad at science.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/monologue-mondays.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>My super-villain monologue.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/08/god-that-girl-she-dug-hole-in-my-mind.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>That girl bore a hole in my mind</b></u></span></a>.<br />
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<span style="color: blue;"><u><b><a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2013/09/ape-monologue-i-hate-ceos.html" target="_blank">I hate CEO's</a> </b></u></span>- This one I actually shot a <b><span style="color: red;">video</span></b> for. I got my friend (a non-actor) to take a crack of reading it. Shot and edited on my iphone. <br />
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<a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2014/07/monologue-mondays.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>A poseur vampire guy defending himself.</b></u></span></a><br />
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<b><i>POETRY:</i></b><br />
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I even wrote some poems.<br />
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Here's one about <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/batman.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>BATMAN</b></u></span></a><span id="goog_38813053"></span><span id="goog_38813054"></span> and one about <a href="http://apeday.blogspot.ca/2012/09/short-james-dean-poem.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><u><b>JAMES DEAN</b></u></span></a><br />
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There's more on this blog, if you scroll through you'll see me developing a changing all my scripts, generally everything you see above is a first draft and you can follow the building process as I go. Like I said, I am currently writing my first full length movie script and it's going very well. I am halfway through and I am proud of what I have so far.<br />
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I ask that anyone who comes across this, if you know of anyone who might be in a position to help a hungry writer get noticed then please pass this page on. This is what I want to do with my life and to make that dream a reality I am going to need to start asking for help.<br />
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Thank you.<br />
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-Thomas Holler<br />
apescripts@gmail.com <br />
<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-35263259521166907912015-03-24T20:42:00.002-07:002015-03-24T20:42:29.325-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: HALFWAY POINT!!! Lets do something F'd up.HALFWAY POINT! What? This thing is real. I am actually going to finish this thing someday, I really am.<br />
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I am writing my first movie, posting each new page as I go. <br />
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Douglas and Abby have just started a happy life. Abby loves Douglas, Douglas adores Abby. One day there's a break. A psychotic break. Abby finds a room full of her favorite dolls, all torn apart and molested. Disturbed writing scrawled all over the walls. Douglas won't admit to it, he says Abby is very sick. Abby says Douglas is very sick. She wants him gone, he wants her back.</blockquote>
I collect it all <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><span style="color: blue;"><b>HERE</b></span></a><br />
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<br /><span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - THE COFFEE SHOP </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas, unshaven and wearing a baseball cap pulled down to his large aviator sunglasses sits watching the world on the other side of the coffee shop window. It's late in the day, people are leaving. Abby exits the building across the street with Bryce, Douglas's jaw tenses. Douglas puts his coffee down and moves out of frame. Outside Abby and Bryce are about to cross the street towards the coffee shop. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The door chimes announce their entrance into the small coffee shop, the gleeful pair walks straight up to the counter. Behind them Douglas's seat is empty. They place a quick order and leave together. Douglas comes back into frame, now with his coat on. He throws down some change from his pocket to cover his bill and leaves. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - DOUGLAS' TRUCK</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas is sitting inside an old black truck, watching from a distance as Abby and Bryce load groceries into the car.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S KITCHEN</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail and Bryce are eating the last of what looks like an incredible meal, Bryce starts to clean up.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I feel like I should help you with that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You don't look like you'd be much help.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Food coma. Please tell me there's not desert.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">There's desert. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Damn you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce brings the plates with him back to the kitchen and returns carrying two big, frosting covered cupcakes.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Now you're in trouble.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">How did you know I love chocolate?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You're a girl.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby joyfully bites into her cupcake. It's perfect. She needs a moment.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yes.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Aaaaaaaaand I found something else back there but I need to run it by you first.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce hold up a bottle of wine.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Oh. Did you want a glass.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well...that sort of depends on whether or not I am driving home tonight?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Ahhhhhhhh...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah...Obviously I'd stay on the couch. I thought maybe it would be fun to share the bottle and make it a late one tonight. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That would be fun, it's just...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am putting the bottle down. It's ok Abby, I get it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Space is just a thing for me right now.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Alone time. I get it. It's ok. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Sorry.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Don't be.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Parked between trees, tucked away in the shadows Douglas' beat up black truck is almost invisible. He's nervously shaking his leg, attention never leaving the view he has of Abby's house. Finally he sees movement, the front door opens. He sits witness to Abigail and Bryce hugging and saying their goodbyes. Bryce heads to his car and starts it up. Douglas breathes an intense sigh of relief.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Phewwwwwwww.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Fuck.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce heads off down the road, Douglas waits. After a minute Douglas says one more thank you and starts to drive away. Just as he's making his turn he takes one last look back at the house in the rear view mirror. Something catches his eye. His brakes slam and the truck comes to a stop.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">In the rear view mirror Douglas sees something heading towards the house. He sees a figure rushing towards Abby's side window. It's so dark Douglas has trouble following it, he can hardly make out what it's doing. What is it doing? Did it just go in the window? Did something just go inside the house?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas gets out and looks around. He can't see the figure, he's starting to panic. He moves closer, aware of the dangers that come with his being spotted. The window is open, it looks like something pushed it open and crawled through. Douglas can't believe this, he staggers forward, his stagger becomes a full stride rushing towards Abigail's side window. He sees a hand print on the ledge.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He listens, he hears Abigail singing upstairs. She's alone. He enters through the window.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S HOUSE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Inside the house it's quiet, Douglas skulks quietly. He's trying to avoid Abigail, he knows how dangerous this is. He can't be seen. He ducks down and surveys the lower floor while Abigail listens to the radio upstairs. He hears a creak in the hallway, he very carefully investigates. It's so dark, he can't tell if there's someone there or not. He feels it. Someone's there, someone's staring back at him. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Something catches his eye, movement from the top of the stairs. He sees Abigail, shes staring back at him. Her face white. She screams.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas motions to Abigail to calm herself, out of the corner of his eye he sees movement in the hallway again. He turns his attention away from Abigail back to the darkness in the front hallway. From out of that darkness a figure stands up, and runs out the front door. Douglas jumps back, startled by what he just saw. He turns back to Abby.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby! Call the police!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas dashes out the front door after the mystery figure.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-21273863981769603792015-03-22T21:28:00.000-07:002015-03-22T21:28:36.587-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: and sometimes it gets a little boring.So. This entry's going to be boring. I've reached the halfway point on my script (fist pump) and now its time for me to build towards the big moment of this movie. The shift. The climax. The WTF moment.<br />
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Unfortunately in order to get there I have to nudge the pieces into place. I need to slow things down a little and get my characters into place. I need to build to this moment organically and give my characters a chance to breath and be people before kicking off my next big shakeup. So here's today's entry. This is Abby showing you that she's determined to get her life back to normal, without Douglas.<br />
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If you're interested in reading the whole script up until this point it can be found right <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><b><span style="color: blue;">HERE</span></b></a>.<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail is up early despite only getting a few hours of sleep the night before. She looks out of her bedroom window, its a beautiful day. Abigail puts on a pair of slippers and heads out into the hall. Out in the hall she stops in her tracks, down the hallway is a room that still scares her. Its the room where she found the dolls torn apart, the twisted writing that littered the walls has been hastily rolled over with a coat of paint. Abby hurries down the hall and closes the door, that room still unnerves her. The house is very quiet.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby heads downstairs to the kitchen. She's startled to see the pantry doors wide open, her body freezes. Something about it looks wrong, the boxes of food look like they've been torn into in a rush. Emptied. Nothing else on the scene seems off, there's no other sign of a break in. Abigail grabs a granola bar out of the pantry and closes it. Soon she's off to work.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S OFFICE</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail walks across her company's busy main floor to her office, the crowds and familiar faces provide comfort for Abigail now. She feels safest at work when she's surrounded by coworkers. Abigail says her hellos while dropping off her things at her desk, she collects her favorite coffee mug and heads for the kitchen. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Oh good. You made it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Hello. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hey Abby.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah I made it. Sort of, I didn't really sleep.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">But you did it. You made it through a whole night alone in that big house. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yup. I am a big girl.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hey, don't dismiss that accomplishment Abby. I know I was against it last night but what you did, spending a night in that house alone...it was one of the bravest things I've ever seen.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank you. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail pours herself a cup of coffee, then offers Bryce a refill on his. He extends his cup, taking her up on the offer. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hey while you were going through the house last night, do you remember grabbing a snack from the kitchen?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No. Your dad was the one who checked the kitchen. Why?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Nothing, I just...I just forgot to buy groceries I guess.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well why don't I help you with that after work?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail hesitates, she's careful to keep her distance with people at the moment. Still feeling like she needs to be by herself for a while, to put the pieces of her life back together before moving on.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Come on. We'll load up. I'll make dinner.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am not asking for a date. I just want to help.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Ok...dinner actually sounds amazing. Thanks Bryce.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(smiles)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Anytime.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail heads back to her desk, Bryce takes a minute to enjoy his coffee before heading back. He wanders over to the window. Directly across the street is same coffee shop Douglas was seen loitering at earlier. </span></div>
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My name's Thomas. I am writing my first movie. I post everything as I go and collect it all <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><b><span style="color: blue;">HERE</span></b></a>. Or look around a little, I've written shows, shorts, and articles all up in this blog before tackling this movie script business.<br />
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<span style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Douglas
and Abby were madly in love. Douglas had just moved into her beautiful
family home in the country, they were happy. Until one day she accused
him of mutilating and violating her dolls and writing psychotic messages
all over the walls. Douglas is pretty sure he didn't do that. Abby
seems absolutely sure that he did. </span></span></blockquote>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">EXT - ABBY'S DAD'S HOUSE</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby's car pulls into a small driveway outside of a modest one floor house. Inside the car she collects her things, before reaching for the door handle Abby stops herself and pulls down the overhead mirror. She see's her scar, it's looking more pronounced than before. The makeup has worn off a little. She starts to touch it up with some powder she takes from her bag.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><i>HONK!</i></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The sound of a carhorn behind her startles Abby, powder is flung into the air. Filling her lungs. She starts to choke and quickly exits the car.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce emerges from the truck behind Abby's and runs to her. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are you ok?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah, pffffffffffttt...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That horn just made me jump and I got makeup in my mouth.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">My fault. I am sorry.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's ok.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail hugs him.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank you so much for coming.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Of course Abby but...I don't think you should be doing this.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I knowww. My dad keep's saying that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Your dad might be right.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">My dad hasn't slept since I've been staying here. He stays up all night, everytime a car's headlights pass by he has to look out the window. If I want things to go back to normal then things have to go back to normal.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah but... </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I haven't heard from him in weeks, and we changed the locks. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't like it.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I need to go home. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce can see that she means it. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Off camera a door swings open. The pair turns to see Abigail's father Richard. He has a concerned look in his face.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - RICHARDS HOUSE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Inside Richard's small home boxes are everywhere, they're being filled by Abigail and Bryce. Richard isn't helping, he's actively trying to get her to stay.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">One more week!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Will one more week actually make me any safer?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yes! </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Ok. I get it, I am scared to go back too but I have to. I haven't been alone in weeks. I need to be by myself, I need to be somewhere where I can just cry and process everything that happened. I need to go home.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard relents.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am going to be checking on you, keeping an eye out for anything. I'll drive past every couple hours, </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You don't need to do that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's happening.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail turns her attention back to Bryce.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I think we're good here, I think we can get this in one trip.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby gives her father one last reassuring look before picking up her box and heading out the door.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">On the drive up the men keep suspicious eyes on every car that passes.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S HOUSE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Inside the house Abby waits with the boxes in the front hallway, Richard and Bryce are going through the house. They look under every bed and inside every closet. Bryce rushes back up from the basement holding his nose.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Told you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I didn't see anything down there. Shelves, a cot, Christmas decorations, lots of garbage. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard emerges from one of the rooms and comes down the stairs.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I think we should do one more sweep, you check all the rooms I checked and I'll check yours.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You both looked everywhere. I saw you look underneath the dresser. He's not a hamster; dad.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Just for tonight maybe I should stay on the couch.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I love you dad. No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Then let him.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">BRYCE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't mind.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Thank you. But no. Please.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Bryce and Richard share a concerned but defeated look. Eventually both giving Abigail a strong hug and well wishes before departing. Abigail closes the door, alone in the house for the first time since the attack.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S BEDROOM</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail settles into her bed, it's dark and very quiet. She's visibly nervous. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She hears a car approach, the sound startles her and she jumps out of bed and heads to the window. She's shaking. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">As the car pulls around the dark corner she feels relief when she recognizes that it belongs to Richard. Her dad's doing just what he said, he's keeping watch. She heads back to bed and forces her eyes closed. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Darkness.</span></div>
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...CONT'D</div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-2586963254901359562015-03-09T21:01:00.002-07:002015-03-11T20:21:13.403-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: This this is my life now.Once again...<br />
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My name's Thomas. I am writing my first movie. I post everything as I go and collect it all <a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><b><span style="color: blue;">HERE</span></b></a>.<br />
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<span style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Douglas and Abby were madly in love. Douglas had just moved into her beautiful family home in the country, they were happy. Until one day she accused him of mutilating and violating her dolls and writing psychotic messages all over the walls. Douglas is pretty sure he didn't do that. Abby seems absolutely sure that he did. </span> </span></blockquote>
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<span style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">When it's finished I guess I'll try to send it out there, I actually have no idea how to do that but let's take it one thing at a time here. Here's today's page.</span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What can you do? She thinks you're trying to kill her. Her dad put a gun to your head and told you to keep away and the police are watching you. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Still though.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Go back to work. Give it some time.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Fuck work.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Doug, step away from this for a bit.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Step away? She broke her face!</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That's MY point. She BROKE her own fucking face. This is a bad situation, back the hell away. I know you love this girl and I know your heart is broken and I know you're worried about her but you need to leave that girl alone. She's psycho. She's legit psycho. Stay away from that girl.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's easy to say that..</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Stay away from that girl!</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I can't.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Stay the FUCK away from that girl.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas doesn't respond. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Don't FUCK your life up. Stay away from that girl!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - A COFFEE SHOP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas pick up his order at a coffee shop and sits by the window. He's wearing a pair of sunglasses and his beard has grown in a little. Its bright by the window, he puts on a cap. He sits looking out the window, eyes trained on the door of an office building across the street. He watches people coming in and out, smiling. It's striking to him how carefree they all seem, its something Douglas is envious of. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Then SHE comes out the door. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas' face saddens. She still has a bruise over her eye, it's been touched up with makeup but it's noticeable. Her coworkers hug her meaningfully, as though they all know what's happening and are being extra supportive of her. A few of them walk her to her car, they're keeping an eye out for anyone suspicious. For the first time it occurs to Douglas that there are people out there who think that he's a predator. A complete psycho who attacks helpless women. He pulls his hat down lower on his face and breaks his stare with the window. He tries to look casual, he takes a sip of coffee. Outside the window Abby hugs her coworkers goodbye. She takes one last look around before getting into her car and driving away. Douglas watches her pull away.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Cont'd...</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-60825767213912170332015-02-25T19:24:00.001-08:002015-03-09T20:10:09.201-07:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Exposition.Ok back to it. So for all of the none of you that actually read this here's what I am doing.<br />
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I am writing my first movie.<br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;">Brief Synopsis:</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"> <span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"> </span></span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">'Douglas
wakes up one morning confronted by his girlfriend accusing him of
tearing apart and molesting her favorite dolls. She thinks he did it, he
thinks she did it. WTF?'</span></span></span></span></blockquote>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">Here's everything so far:</span></span></span></span><br />
<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><br /></a>
<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"><a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"><span style="color: blue;">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</span> </span></span></span></span></a> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - GRANT'S LIVING ROOM</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas wakes up on Grant's couch. His head is pounding, his eyes are bloodshot, he's disheveled, hungover. It hurts to move. Douglas fumbled around at the coffee table in front of him, it's littered with garbage. He finds a half empty bottle of water and downs it, he managed to get to a sitting position. He sits, holding his head and breathing heavily for a minute before trying to stand up. Douglas struggles to his feet.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Standing up now Douglas can see out the window into the front yard, his truck is parked right in the middle of Grant's front lawn. Grant's garden doesn't look so good.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Shit.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah shit.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas turns to see Grant, he's carrying a cup of coffee.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Drink some fucking coffee. Idiot. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am sorry.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What the fuck were you doing driving last night?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't know. </span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DRINK!</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas drinks his coffee, his takes a seat. </span></div>
<div style="text-align: left;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What happened?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I went home. I went to Abby. I got arrested, they told me she got attacked last night. They think it's me. She has a broken eye socket.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The..........seriously?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She didn't see her attacker. </span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's hard to see imaginary people.</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">How would she even do that? Break her own eye socket?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She punched herself.</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Hard enough to break the socket?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Maybe she hit herself with something, or she threw herself into a wall. </span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She hits herself in the face with like...a rock, then she gets back in bed and waits for someone to find her? Why?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't know. </span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are we really thinking she's that far gone?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">...I don't know.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Douglas's leg bounces with nervous anxiety. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I talked to her. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Really? When?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I called her from the bar. She said I was a mistake.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Bryce is with her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Well...She's his problem now.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">FUCK YOU!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am sorry dude. I know this sucks, in fact this is honestly the shittiest thing I've ever heard but seriously, I don't want you going back to her. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">FUCK YOU! We were laying in bed together only a couple days ago. I was planning to marry her. You think I can just turn that off and say "Ah fuck it, let Bryce have her. She's crazy"? You think I can let this go? She BROKE her fucking EYE!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant has no response.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">CONT'D</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-15283988261368328532015-02-16T21:12:00.000-08:002015-02-16T21:12:20.484-08:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Go back and fix crap.So I finally read over what I have so far, I feel like I am missing a scene. I need something to help build up this tension that's set to boil over between my couple.<br />
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Hence, today's page. I'll sandwich it in somewhere near the beginning.<br /><br /><br />
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<br /><span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - KITCHEN</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">A pot boils on the stove.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Ok, throw them in.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby is holding two large lobsters.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am having second thoughts.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas laughs.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I knew this was going to happen. I told you in the store. I knew you'd bond with them by the time we got home.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Arrrrgggg...I really want lobster too.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby looks at the two lobsters, all tied up and at her mercy. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Uggg...why did I name them?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why don't you give them to me and leave the room.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Nooooo. I know what you're going to do with them.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am going to cook them. That's why we bought them Abby, you were so excited in the store.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I knowwwwwww...I am being weird. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Can I have them?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas's body language registers frustration but on him face is a big smile. He can't get mad at that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You know we can't keep two pet lobsters, right? They would just die anyway Abby.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why can't we just let them go? We can take them to the lake.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abbbbbbbyyyyyyy...this is adorable but I really don't want to do that. This was my dinner too, I was excited.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> But think about how mean that is. Peter and Pepper will thank us, we can save them. It'll be like a Disney movie. The first half of the movie will be about how they got caught and forced to survive in that aquarium at the restaurant. Watching their friends being chosen and then eaten in front of them. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">This is dark.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah! And then it gets really dark when a young couple comes into the restaurant and chooses both of them. At least they get to die together; they think. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Jeez.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">But then at the last minute the couple looks at them and see's how in love they are and how scared, so they decide to let them go. They give them a new life in a beautiful lake with lots of food. All because they had a last minute change of heart.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am not sold. Do you even know for sure they they're a boy and girl?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby doesn't.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(unconvincingly)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yes.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby you're cute. But I want to eat these guys.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Oh come on. You love animals as much as I do.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Yeah?<br /><br />ABBY</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">And I don't see you being able to eat Petey and Pepper, now that...</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas takes them away from Abby and puts them right into the boiling pot in one cold motion.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Wanna bet?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby is shocked. She can't believe that Douglas could be that callous. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The pot screams.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - THE KITCHEN TABLE</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas as Abby sit across from each other at the table, not speaking. Douglas is enjoying his lobster, Abby hasn't touched hers.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-70987431103102359912015-02-03T21:20:00.004-08:002015-02-03T21:20:43.864-08:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Ouch...<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;">I am at aboouuuuut the quarter mark of my first movie script, so far my rough plotting has worked out pacing wise. That surprises me, I thought I'd screw that up more.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;">Brief Synopsis:</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"> <span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"> </span></span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">'Douglas
wakes up one morning confronted by his girlfriend accusing him of
tearing apart and molesting her favorite dolls. She thinks he did it, he
thinks she did it. WTF?'</span></span></span></span></blockquote>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">Here's everything so far:</span></span></span></span><br />
<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><br /></a>
<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"><a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html" target="_blank"><span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"><span style="color: blue;">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</span> </span></span></span></span></a> </span><br />
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<br /><span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas gets into his truck and drives. He has nowhere to go, he lost his home and his woman who he's worried sick about but can't go near for risk of being thrown in jail. He punches his steering wheel, he screams and he cries. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - A DINGY BAR - MID-DAY</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas sits slumped in a bar stool, his nose bandaged sloppily, he's drunk. The bar he's in is a dive, the kind of bar you can walk into at 11 am and get drunk with a group of sad strangers in. A sombre tune plays in the background. Douglas sits; his eyes staring forward but vacant, locked on something unseen. He's lost in his thoughts, playing the last few days over and over in his head. His empty drink is refilled.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - A DINGY BAR -EVENING</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas is in the same spot hours later. Douglas' eyes sit fixated on a payphone in the corner. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - ABIGAIL'S HOUSE</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail is sitting at her coffee table, she's not alone. The police weren't lying, her face has suffered a fracture. Her eye is blackened and her cheek is swollen but in that typical Abby way, she still looks cute. Her phone rings, unknown caller. She knows it's Douglas, she tenses and then answers against her better judgement.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Silence.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why are you calling me?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What do you mean why am I calling you? </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Two days ago we were in bed together. Our bed.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The police told you not to contact me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">They told me you got attacked.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Abby what happened?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail doesn't answer.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby how did you get hit?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail doesn't answer. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby they think it's me. Can we please talk?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No Douglas. I don't ever want to see you again.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DON'T SAY THAT. Abby, god damn it. We both know it isn't ME who hit you last night.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">...what?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I love you so much Abby. How could you honestly believe I'd hit you? You KNOW I didn't. You know it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Stay away from me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I CAN'T Abby. You're sick and you're hurting yourself.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail starts to shake. A voice calls to her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Is that your dad?</span></div>
<div style="text-align: center;">
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Its Bryce. Bryce is with me, he's here to keep me safe from you.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas falls silent.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You were my biggest mistake. I was so wrong about you. I am glad I found out when I did, now I want to forget you. I never want to see you again.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail hangs up. Douglas holds the phone to his ear in stunned silence until the dial tone stops.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Cont'd...</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-44950793816443817332015-02-01T12:30:00.004-08:002015-02-01T12:30:58.333-08:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Everyone is against you.<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;">I am writing my first movie...kinda winging it.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;">Brief Synopsis:</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"> <span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"> </span></span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">'Douglas
wakes up one morning confronted by his girlfriend accusing him of
tearing apart and molesting her favorite dolls. She thinks he did it, he
thinks she did it. WTF?'</span></span></span></span></blockquote>
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<span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0">Here's everything so far:</span></span></span></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;"><span style="font-family: Georgia,"Times New Roman",serif;"><span class="_5yl5" data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0"><span data-reactid=".1t.$mid=11422657219219=2a1fe39555f0ae27825.2:0.0.0.0.0.0.$end:0:$4:0"><a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</span></a> </span></span></span></span> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - GRANT'S LIVING ROOM - MORNING</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant is passed out in his chair, beer bottles are all over the table in front of him. Douglas is sitting up, he's been awake all night. The morning sun is just starting to set.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas has been up waiting, when the sun breaks he can't wait anymore. He gets up and takes the car keys from off of the table in front on Grant and makes his way out the front door. Outside the truck is parked haphazardly, half on the driveway and half on the front lawn. The back of the truck is smashed in, the bumper is dangling. Douglas pays it no mind, he climbs in and starts the engine, the bumper drags along the ground as he pulls away.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">It's a long drive to Abagail's house outside the city, it takes a nervous hour and a half for him to finally reach the lonely turnoff onto Abagail's road. When his car makes the turn Douglas notices a police car pull up behind him. Soon he's flanked on either side by police cruisers demanding him to pull over. When Douglas complies he's told to get out of his vehicle.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">POLICE OFFICER</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">STEP OUT OF THE VEHICLE WITH YOUR ARMS RAISED.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What did I do???</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">POLICE OFFICER</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">STEP OUT NOW!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas steps out of his truck and is immediately tackled and hand cuffed, he's violently picked up and thrown into the back of the police car.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - POLICE INTERROGATION ROOM</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas looks exhausted, he's sitting in a chair being grilled by a no nonsense cop. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Last night Abagail was attacked in her room while she slept.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What?</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"><br /></span>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Last night after you had your altercation with her and her father where you were asked to leave for doing...unsavory acts, she was left alone in her house where she claims someone hit her in her sleep.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Her father left her alone???</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He's the one who found her the next morning, with a broken eye socket and a mild concussion. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">How could she do that to herself?</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Herself? </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She's sick. You have to help her.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We are helping her. Infact we're looking at the prime suspect in this assault right now.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I wasn't there!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No, according to your statement you were with your friend Grant all night. Yet when we found you, you were alone speeding towards Abagail's house.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Its still my home. All my stuff's there.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Any dispute over your belongings is between you, her and the courts. The property belongs to Abagail, any attempt to access her property will be considered an intrusion. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Where's Abagail?</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Do you think I am going to give you that information. We're going to serve your with a restraining order that says you have to stay at least 50 feet away from her at all times. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas can't process all this information, his life has utterly crumbled in the last 24 hours. It shows.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I will let you know that she's going to be ok. She's very shaken, she's very scared of you but she's going to be ok. We're here to make sure of it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">If you really think I did it then why don't you just arrest me already?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">The only reason you aren't in one of those cells right now is because she didn't see her attacker.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are you sure there was an attacker?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Are you asking me if I think she broke her own orbital bone and then went back to bed?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(he stares hard at Douglas)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No. I don't think that. I think you did it, I think you have a key, I think you came back in the middle of the night and I think you hit her with something with the intention to kill her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">But I'd know I am the most obvious suspect. You really think anyone could be that stupid? </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Not stupid. Like you said, sick.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What now?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Like I told you, we don't have enough evidence to press charges. You can go.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas stands up to be let out of the room.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Make sure your leave your new address with our detectives before you leave, and make sure you never go anywhere near that girl or her house again. I am serious.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">How do I get my things?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">COP</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Call a lawyer.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">A buzzer sounds and the door out of the room opens, Douglas leaves. Still trying to process everything that's taken place. He's led out the front door back to his truck.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-44326335413804166512015-01-29T21:33:00.002-08:002015-01-29T21:33:36.913-08:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: Is This Chick Crazy?So here's what this is.<br />
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I am writing a movie, it's my first. So far a guy moved into his girlfriend's house, loved her madly and then woke up one day to find that she did something totally psycho.<br /><br />Here's everything so far.<br /><br /><a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html"><span style="color: blue;">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</span></a><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Jesus Abby. Are you really crazy?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What if she is Doug?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Then she'll need my help.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas takes note of Grant's reluctant expression.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I was going to propose to this one.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">(beat)</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am going to propose to this one.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Dude, don't think like that right now. Think about what you're going to do to get her help, because I really don't know what you can do.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Find a doctor...</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Doctors won't see her unless she wants to be seen. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I'll talk to her.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Her dad said he'd kill you if you came back.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We'll see if he meant it. I am going back. Fuck him.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant cracks open another beer. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I think you should walk away, dude. Sorry. I mean; this is some shit.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That's not an option. I can't. I love her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> She's bad news Doug. She's crazy. Not just girl "crazy", actual crazy. You can never be comfortable around her after this. You'll never sleep again, god knows what you'd wake up to if you did. IF you wake up!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas fall quiet.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am sorry to say this to you but it needs to be said. This girl just showed you a HUGE red flag...fuck that, this girl just showed you a room full of dolls that she molested. There is no clearer "stay away" sign. That's FUCKED. I didn't want to say this before but I am scared shitless of her now. Seriously. I am glad this happened now, before you got any deeper into this. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas doesn't respond.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I know you loved this girl but...she's dangerous dude. You need to give her space and stay far away. The wrong woman will fuck up your life, a psycho will shorten your life. Is any of this getting through to you?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">No.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-47164613571933450812015-01-22T20:56:00.000-08:002015-01-27T20:06:32.898-08:00TOM WRITES A MOVIE: Swear and talk it out.I've been writing my first movie (<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</a>).<br />
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Each blog entry I ad about a page to it, here's today's installment:<br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">INT - NIGHT - GRANT'S LIVING ROOM</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant
helps Douglas get to the couch where he collapses. Grant tosses him a
washcloth to clean himself up with, he heads into the kitchen to get
first-aid supplies. Douglas starts to wipe the blood from his face,
wincing in pain as he does. Grant re-enters with the first-aid kit, he
puts it on the table in front of Douglas and sits down. He struggles to
find the right words to say. What do you say to someone who just has his
life torn apart?</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">We'll go back. We'll give it some time, let her calm down. Then we'll go back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas doesn't respond. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Should we call the police.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">They'll believe her.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't even know what we'd tell them. I don't know what this is. What is this?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I don't know! I don't know what happened.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You didn't see this coming at all?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">THIS? Did I see THIS happening?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Or any indication that something was wrong with her?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Nothing's wrong with her. Something happened. She's sick. Maybe she was always sick and never told me. Maybe she was on medication, maybe she stopped taking it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> Wouldn't her dad have known if she needed medication?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">He probably does.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Then why wouldn't he have told you?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Because he's s piece of fucking shit.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas's face begins to bleed again as he gets more animated.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">FUCK!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant gets up and leaves the frame, the shot stays tight on Douglas, in the background we hear Grant going though the fridge. He comes back with two cans of beer and hands one to Douglas. Douglas presses the cold can to his swollen face. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am sorry man. I don't know what to say.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> ...Fucking dolls.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Why do you think she'd do that? What would compel someone to create a scene like that? </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You should have seen her face, that's when I knew she wasn't well. The look in her eyes. She really thinks I did that, she's scared of me.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You know what the means? She woke up sometime in the night while you were sleeping and crept into the other room, then she tore apart all her dolls, tore apart the whole room, wrote violent things all over the wall, did...sexual things with those dolls and then waited for you to wake up so she could act like she thought you did it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">She wasn't acting. She really thinks I did it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That's even scarier Douglas.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Cont'd...</span></div>
Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07046207843168234306noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8142157495929189174.post-1717167935619890622015-01-11T20:52:00.002-08:002015-01-11T20:52:49.354-08:00TOM WRITES HIS FIRST MOVIE: The movie officially starts here.<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"></span><br />
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Been working on a movie script, it's my first one. One page at a time I am getting it done.
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I collect it all here as I go:<br />
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<a href="http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html">http://tcqscripts.blogspot.ca/2014/12/i-am-not-weirdo.html</a></div>
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Here's today's entry:</div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas and Grant are in a daze after the collision, when they finally come to they're faced with a shotgun and an ultimatum.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Turn around. Never come back.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Richard! </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">If you ever come near my daughter again I'll kill you. I swear to god. You're done around here. Leave.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail needs help.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That's why I am here. She told me all about you; you piece of shit. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Jesus Christ put your gun down.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">You get him out of here. You get him away from my daughter or I'll shoot you both. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am not leaving! Abigail NEEDS help. She's sick Richard. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas we have to go.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span></div>
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">NO! Richard listen to me, Abigail did this. She did all of this. She needs a doctor.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas
feels dizzy from the collision, things around him slow down and fall
silent. He doesn't hear Richard and Grant shouting at each other. His
eyes are moving towards the house, he see Abby looking out the window.
He snaps out of it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abby!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas stumbles out of the car and attempt to walk to house.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GET BACK IN YOUR CAR!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas
ignores him. Richard responds by belting Douglas across the face with
the butt of his gun. Douglas falls to the ground at Richard's feet.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">What were you doing with my daughter? What kind of game were you playing?</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Blood spews from Douglas's mouth, Grant runs over and tries to pick him up.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ALRIGHT! We're gone. We're leaving.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant helps Douglas to his feet, Douglas locks eyes with Richard and his shotgun.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">RICHARD</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I knew you were no good.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas
has had enough, he charges Richard and takes him off his feet. The two
wrestle around and the shotgun goes off, no one is hit but everyone is
startled. The fighting doesn't stop, the gun goes off again. This time
too close to Grant.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant
pulls Douglas off of Richard, Richard responds by pointing his gun at
Douglas's head. Everyone can see in Richards eyes that he's going to
pull the trigger. Douglas braces.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Stop! Dad, stop. Just let them go.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail runs over crying, as much as she's afraid of Douglas she still loves him. He's madly in love with her still.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">ABIGAIL</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant, get him out of here.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">DOUGLAS</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">NOOOO!!! </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Douglas sits bloodies on</span><span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> his knees, he's trying his hardest to hold everything together. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Abigail, I am not leaving you!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;"> ABIGAIL</span><br />
<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">I am scared of you.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">That hurt him more that the car crash or getting gun butted on the nose.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">GRANT</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">C'mon man.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Grant picks his friend up and gets him into the passenger side of their car. As they peel out the back bumper falls out, broken glass sprinkles the road behind them as they drive away. Douglas' eyes are glued to Abigail as they pull away, she's crying in her father's arms. Douglas' eyes close.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Courier New",Courier,monospace;">Cont'd</span></div>
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